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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Oh my stars, I felt this one deep as I read it. I love the balance in perspectives, the pacing, it is so wonderful 💞

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Micah J. Marrapodi's avatar

I’m so glad to hear that! Thank you for your support!

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

This was an incredibly emotional and beautiful piece of flash fiction, Micah! I really loved the breaks throughout as we jumped from one perspective to another. It really made the story flow smoothly while also covering a lot of ground.

Thanks for entering the challenge!

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